Matt Bellamy

Hi! First of all I must say, I absolutely love this line: "We’re drunk on ink instead of beer". Awesome! I can kind of tell that you didn't know when ...

Hello! I like how you used description and emotion in this poem, it worked really well.I just have a couple of nitpicks though. You use commas all the way through ...

Hi! When I saw the title, I thought that death/sadness would be described like a spider's web and I think it would be great if you could do that. I ...

I thought this was good. It's emotional without being too dramatic, and the ending is bittersweet. I think you could improve it perhaps by adding in something that is a ...

I was going to comment on the fact that highway and the other words were so far away and that they'd look better if they were a bit closer, but ...

I haven't read the previous comments because I'm doing this on my phone, so sorry if I repeat anyone. I like how you used personification in this piece, making the ...

This poem is really cute! It feels quite light-hearted because of the rhyming - the words you use to rhyme are a bit simple and obvious, but if it was ...

I like this, it feels like you're saying passion is a bad thing because even though it's meant to be good, if you feel so strongly about something, you're going ...

I imagined the same thing Snickers did while reading this poem, and I think what makes it really good is the way you use dialogue- it's not very easy to ...

Hooray, a metaphor! I love metaphors, I'm a compete sucker for them, and I haven't heard this one before, so I think it's pretty original. Although, the whole what goes ...

I think this has a similar quality to that of a haiku. Haiku are written as little snippets in time. They don't really explicitly talk about emotion by saying "I'm ...

This is a very emotional piece and I feel like you wrote this a lot for yourself to get some anger out, which is great. Maybe you could add a ...

Well, it definitely felt cold. I like it. I like the rhythm and the tone. It sounds angry, but in a distant, dissociative kind of way, if that makes sense. ...

Hey Eddie! I love metaphors so this is right up my street. You describe things very well and clearly. I think the mention of glass and sand in the first ...

Hello! I really like this poem and its message, particularly the end. At first I wasn't sure about the rhyming because it sounds a little too happy for the beginning ...